Our fellow students have watched our rough cut of our opening and have given us substantial feedback which will help us improve our coursework for the final deadline. Some of the things that the other groups have stated are:
- Looks like a trailer
- Cannot understand the plot/major plot hole
- Too short
- Not enough use of camera shots and editing techniques
The list above are the things that the other groups feel need improvement on and so what Jerdazis will do, is that we will start with making the opening not look like a trailer and in order for to not look like we need to cut and add more footage; this can be done with the extra footage we have taken as a precaution. Next would be to fix the major plot hole. In order for this to be fixed we must travel to the place where we shot that particular scene and add some extra shots so that the audience don’t waver from the plot also add an insert shot to further establish the story. And lastly would be to use a wide array of camera shots and to give the main character more face time, these things can be done with the extra footage that we have using the different camera shots allocated.
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