-See more of the main character so the audience can establish that the film is about him.
-Use cross dissolve transitions to indicate that the main character is having a flashback.
-Do an insert shot of the couple holding their hands with the wedding rings visible to establish that they are married and are on their honeymoon.
-Refilm the couple coming out of the airport as it not clear as to what is going on,the hug and the dialogue is fairly random so that will need to be changed too.
-Make the establishing shot of the opening of our film explicitly establish the genre of our film.
-Make Juanita's dialogue louder and clearer to hear.
-Get rid of any unnecessary diegetic sound.
-Include shots of the main character 'thinking' so it is obvious to the audience that he cares about his wife and to also evoke empathy.
-Also,a reason to why he cannot just simply hand over the tape.
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